tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-39100543411739349332024-02-21T05:26:27.649-08:00The Dragon's QuillAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03173562052707675381noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3910054341173934933.post-11553202753386996982019-01-19T09:14:00.001-08:002019-01-19T09:14:39.243-08:00Goodbye Blogger<br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">For almost half of 2018, I used the Blogger platform to share some of my ideas about writing and some of my fiction. It has been a wonderful experience in both creativity and sharing. This will be my last post on Blogger. Before I open my new Bluehost site, I would like to share the pleasures and the joy of using Blogger and my fundamental reasons for leaving it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">When I first set up my blog, I was most concerned with cost. What would it cost to register my domain name? What would be the hosting fee? How many extra options would I need to purchase to enhance the appearance of my page?<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>What kind of interface would my readers have with the comments section? Since my site was not for profit, whatever costs I incurred would be mine alone.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">If you are not planning to use your blog to make you rich and your primary goal is sharing ideas you need look no further than Blogger.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>The sum of your cost to blog on Blogger is zero. It is free.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">How is this possible?<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Why are there so many articles dealing with the costs and the frustrations of setting up blogs on Bluehost, SiteGround, and DreamHost? <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="The answer is explained" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-F2C32A6B3ED16D5CEC8B69EB47625C41" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="I explain the answer~It explains the answer~They explain the answer~We explain the answer~I explains the answer~Someone explains the answer~It explain the answer~Someone explain the answer">The answer is explained</pwa> as you set up your Blogger blog. Blogger is a part of the Google Empire. That <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is seen" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-770466B5AC89B5B46C2D2DD9EA9CBE68" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="">is seen</pwa> in the web address of your blog. Your web page address will always be of the form, your_name. blogspot.com.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Blogspot refers to Blogger. What it conveys is your web page shares a part of the space allocated to you by Google. The keyword is Google. <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="You are given" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-89E392743A2D6AEFD0C41C6D17D7E9DE" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="I give you~It gives you~They give you~I gives you~It give you~Someone gives you~Someone give you~Something gives you~They gives you~Us give you~Us gives you">You are given</pwa> a spot in the Google blogging universe<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>The domain name belongs to Google; not to you.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">Blogger also provides excellent web exposure. For someone new to the blogging universe <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="the value of this cannot be overemphasized" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-158ED1F0B58048634BF17DFEB3287A27" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="we can overemphasize the value of this~I can overemphasize the value of this">the value of this cannot be overemphasized</pwa>. Remember that Blogger is a part of Google. Google swears its search algorithms are impartial and a post appearing on Blogger will not <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be weighted" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-C70EAF043FADC573B2BF4A6FE1708A71" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="">be weighted</pwa> higher than the same post on DreamHost. I cannot remark on the truthfulness of that in either direction. I leave that for much better statisticians than I.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">Bloggers best feature is that it is easy to use.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>It gives you an editor that lets you type your post. There are numerous options to build on that but if your need to write stems from a demanding urge to <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be read" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-EA772D4628DA77FFC75D5EE11638AB0E" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="">be read</pwa> Blogger is the answer to your blogging dreams.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">Blogger does not restrict you to just one blog. Supposing you want to write about the attributes of good writing. You also want to publish some of your own fiction, and you also want to post reviews you have written about novels you have enjoyed reading. You plan to do this on three different blogs. Most hosting platforms charge extra if you want two or more blogs. Not Blogger. Two or more cost the same as one. Blogger is a great cost-based decision.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">So, why am I leaving Blogger? Not because of any direct action against me taken by Google.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>As far as I know, Google does not know who I am or what I write. They couldn't care less, and that is the way it should be.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>However…………….</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">Blogger is a part of Google. Google is bigger than any hosting platform by itself. What made me question why I even used Blogger was reading the agreement with Google for giving me room to post on Blogger for free.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>I did not sell my soul to Google, but as related to my using Blogger I might as well have done so. I do not own my blog, Google does. I agree that if I write or advocate something that violates Google's concept of value or ethics, Google may take Blogger away from me. Well, big deal. The words I posted are mine, aren’t they?<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>My posts are mine, aren’t they? No, and no again. The words are on my blog, yes, but my blog belongs to Google.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>If Google blocks your access to Blogger how far can they make you feel the pain? Well, you joined Blogger using your<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Google account. You’ve lost Blogger, you may also lose your Google Account.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Whoops, what happened to Gmail. Are you sure you will <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be able to " data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by removing this" data-pwa-id="pwa-543F1B0897A4A984EA849EA3801623AB" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_0" data-pwa-suggestions="(omit)">be able to </pwa>question Google about anything? Is this far-fetched? Yes. But, read the agreement you signed and understand it’s not impossible.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">, Blogger is a part of the Google family. If you are using Blogger and it went away how would you react?<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>How Silly, you mumble. Never going to happen. Well, think for a moment. Which of these do you remember:</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">I like Blogger. It suited my needs, and I recommend it to new bloggers and people curious about blogging. Google did nothing to force me out of the Blogger nest. I am leaving because I don’t like what I <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="was willing to" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: will" data-pwa-id="pwa-10CED651BA93C81D75FA2A38F07F933C" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_992" data-pwa-suggestions="will">was willing to</pwa> give up to use it.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">My new blogging address is https://rlbquill.com.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>It is open now and has all the posts from the Blogger site. I have changed the name to “The Writer’s Stone”<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>because the philosophy driving the blog has changed.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>The first new post on “The Writer’s Stone” will reflect and explain these changes.</span></div>
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<span class="s1"><span style="font-size: large;">When you read this the gods of time and space will have shifted a dimension and we will <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be living" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: live" data-pwa-id="pwa-6E8B3842CDA5DE3E69E1E1199B0F6DCE" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_1507" data-pwa-suggestions="live">be living</pwa> and struggling in 2019. Since that event will occur in a few hours I feel compelled to produce something worth reading. My desire to do this is not immediate nor does it come from a blast of creative force spurred by the end of this year. I maintain a writing notebook, and in the section reserved for blogging ideas, I had noted for the end of the year a post dealing with procrastination as a valuable writing tool rather than an impediment or writer's bane. Knowing I would view this topic with a jaundiced eye I had marked it with an asterisk which told me I could not renumber or move the topic from first to the second or third idea. Considering the second and third topics were "My writing tools of choice" and "Why do I insist on writing 'xxx' number of words every day". I very much wanted to move this essay on procrastination to the last position but knew if I did so it would continue its journey down the list until it fell off. What writer starts the new year singing the virtues of procrastinating.</span></span></div>
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<span class="s1"><span style="font-size: large;">As a writer, I welcome procrastination as a valuable tool. Let us work toward an exact definition of procrastination from a writers point of view. It is not the time spent doing chores or spending time with your mate and your child. All of these are endeavors that need to <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done pwa-unused" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be accomplished" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-F67E92DB0355A4300402183024A972D4" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="">be accomplished</pwa>; they are valuable tasks not to <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done pwa-unused" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="be ignored" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-42D6D9E325668E3E299862AA10353AEC" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="">be ignored</pwa>. Procrastination is time spent not writing when you think you should be writing. You're human. Things happen. Your fingers touch the keys but nothing you produce fosters creative activity. Sometimes you feel you should write but your mind says no. Unless you are working under a deadline where something unpleasant will happen if you don't write,<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>try to listen to your need to write nothing. Rather than ignoring the need to create encourage your mind to be receptive to exploring ideas.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">Never since Guttenberg dreamed of mass producing the bible has it been so easy for us to be writers. We no longer need reams of typewriter paper or magic white-out strips to build a manuscript. Gone are literary agents and writing clubs. We have Grammarly, Pro Writing Aide, and Hemingway to help us produce syntactically correct writing. Facebook puts us in close contact with other writers. So, answer me this. With all the help we can access;<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>with the world at our fingertips why do we produce so much shit? Why are so many published writers illiterate?<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>During a recent college symposium dealing with two English Authors, George Orwell, and D. H. Lawrence, no one knew when Orwell wrote and published <b>1984</b>. 15 people in a graduate writing class could not answer the question which tells you that Orwell's life was an unknown to these creative writing students. Orwell transposed the year he wrote 1984 to create the title. The book <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="was written" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-4BF574E1D1682FAB4676CA626C058A9F" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="">was written</pwa> in 1948, published in 1949 and he died in 1950. When asked <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="which was written" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-6780815866049807D1CA0E3376C56BCA" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="I wrote which~they wrote which~it wrote which~someone wrote which~us wrote which~something wrote which">which was written</pwa> first, <b>1984</b> or <b>Animal Farm</b>, there was no real discussion, only guessing.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">Neither author was a rebel or anarchist. Neither attempted to burn Parliament nor did they curse the Royal family. They each burned with ideas not shared nor commonly held. Like us, they did not get on a soapbox or climb the roof of a building to proclaim their beliefs.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">If it moves you and you’ve never heard it before, it is the opening lines of HOWL by Allen Ginsberg. If you’ve heard of neither, you have a moral obligation to change the education system so your children will feel what real creativity can do to you and for you.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Even if you’ve read it before, read it again. Read it now. It's free, and it’s right here: </span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">We need to scream. We have ideas and we feel emotions that others think exist but do not pursue. Stop running. If you have nothing of value to scream, if you enjoy living in ennui, stop writing. If, in your soul is a message you need to get out; something you must share then write.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>As you write you have the God-given right to throw back your head and scream whatever burns in you.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">Amazon sells several new books at the very reasonable price of $0.99 to $2.99.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Some of these books are real gems and provide a terrific read for pennies. Others <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="are poorly written" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-220CFF5575329CA9C959576B73E3560D" data-pwa-rule-id="null" data-pwa-suggestions="">are poorly written</pwa> and should never have seen the light of day.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03173562052707675381noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3910054341173934933.post-11099571961971597262018-11-28T11:45:00.000-08:002018-11-28T11:45:31.319-08:00You Put Your Ideas Where?<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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<span style="font-size: large;">As a<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>creative writer, you get ideas you want to pursue. They may be ideas for a basic plot, a character quirk, some perspective which makes the surrounding unique. Now you have this unique lightning bolt of creative energy,<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>what do you do with it? Where do you put it?</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">If you’re in front of your computer or laptop, you write and develop the idea. But what if you are at your favorite club or restaurant?<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>You could jot it on a napkin.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>For a long time, writers carried small notepads or pieces of paper in their pockets just to keep tabs on the ideas which came to them when they could not be writing.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">Now we understand the value of keeping a writer’s notebook.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Do we carry scraps of paper and ball-point pens wherever we go?<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>If that is your preference, by all means, continue that tradition.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>There are many creative people today who go nowhere without their<span class="Apple-converted-space"></span> pocket notebook.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;"><br />Early on I learned the value of not saying “All” or “Always”.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>If I say “All creative people carry a pen.”,<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>my argument falls apart by finding one creative person who does not carry a pen. I can say with some certainty that most writers carry an iPhone, an Android, or some electronic device that 1) acts as a telephone, and 2) has available software for working with information.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">I am an Apple fanatic so my software of choice is always Mac based. I know there are almost always equivalent applications for other hardware and operating systems.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>The one requirement I must have is the ability to pass recorded information from the phone to both iPad or tablet and to MacBook or PC. If that can’t happen, the application is not worth its cost.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">The most basic note taking application I have and use is <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Notes" data-pwa-hint="Incorrect verb after 'is'" data-pwa-id="pwa-639B0D062D95D1C7B9C5D822988A9741" data-pwa-suggestions="noted">Notes</pwa> on my iPhone. It is quick to activate, easy to get an idea into, and once done, it is available to all my other Mac devices. In a restaurant, or just walking around it is invaluable when recording a quick idea or thought.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Its greatest value is the automatic syncing. I can review and enhance my ideas on any device and <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="grammar" data-pwa-dictionary-word="know" data-pwa-hint="Possible confused word" data-pwa-id="pwa-652B732059C028BB16C0437D35EDC94F" data-pwa-suggestions="now">know</pwa> it is available anytime on my other devices.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>I do not use my thumbs well on the iPhone, so my primary use of Notes is to get the minimal idea out of my head and on the Cloud.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">I have also used Evernote but their developers seem to force a move from the free account to the pay for service model. Not enough bang for the buck.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">While Notes meets the need for a Writers Notebook, I wish to introduce an application which you can use as a Notebook and also allows you to build on your ideas. If you wish you could use it to write your entire story. It is not a cheap application and I have a version for OSX (my MacBook) and for IOS (iPad and iPhone). Again,<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>I like and use it. Your mileage may vary.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">The application is Devonthink Pro. I used it to build a database called IDEAS. Within that Database, I have three groups; Short Story Ideas, Blog post Ideas, and Novel Ideas. Again, you can use it on the iPhone, to the iPad, to the MacBook and syncing is immediate and painless. What I like most about this application is I can develop and enhance my ideas to whatever level I wish.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>It allows me to write the entire story if I wish. For example, this is an entry I made Thanksgiving before the meal hit the table. As you can see, I set the mood in the first sentence. I could have continued and written the entire story if I was a good thumb typist and it was not a festive meal.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">I thumbed this into my iPhone and then corrected my thumb failures using my iPad later in the evening. Whether you use a simple text editor, or a <pwa class="pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="spelling" data-pwa-dictionary-word="Databae" data-pwa-hint="Unknown word: Databae" data-pwa-id="pwa-8264D88631C38B7A0D91A1B9F70127E5" data-pwa-suggestions="Atabae~data~tube~debt~death">Databae</pwa> system to record and develop your ideas, the goal is the quick and easy recall of your thoughts. It should not matter if they are yesterday's ideas or those of last year. Your notebook is </span><span style="font-size: large;">a friend you need to hold close.</span></div>
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<div class="p1"><span style="font-family: 'helvetica neue' , 'arial' , 'helvetica' , sans-serif; font-size: large;">If you are listening very carefully, you will feel rather than hear the subtle pressure of thousands of fingers gently tapping against the membrane slightly below plastic keys. The sound of NaNoWriMo is incessant, and a dedicated group of writers and writer wannabes are gently bringing their dreams to life. It is a day past the midway point, and they have been writing one thousand six hundred and sixty-seven words a day.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<div class="p1"><span style="font-family: 'helvetica neue' , 'arial' , 'helvetica' , sans-serif; font-size: large;">By taking part in this challenge, you have promised to write almost 1,700 words a day. That’s a goodly amount of work to produce every day for thirty days. Given any day how much time will you have to edit what you have written today or to date?<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Zero time. That’s good. Keep this thought in the forefront of your mind as you work. For thirty days you write, and for thirty days you will not edit. This is your first draft. You do not worry about grammar, tense, adverbs, and adjectives. What incredible freedom to have as you write.</span></div>
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<div class="p1"><span style="font-family: 'helvetica neue' , 'arial' , 'helvetica' , sans-serif; font-size: large;"><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>At the end of 30 days, assuming you have complied with your goal of 50,000 words, you have actually written the first draft of your novel. You have accomplished a tremendous, compelling goal. That which has been a romanticized dream is now an accomplished work.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>You still have a ton of editing to do, but what an excellent reason to take on NaNoWriMo. In your possession is the real, physical body of your dream.</span></div>
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<div class="p1"><span style="font-family: 'helvetica neue' , 'arial' , 'helvetica' , sans-serif; font-size: large;">Many advocates of NaNoWriMo tout its power to put you in the habit of writing at least a thousand words a day. I don’t think so. Contrary to popular belief writing thousands of words each day may not be suitable for you or your manuscript. Binge writing is not an indicator of quality writing. If you can produce 500 words of good prose a day, you have decent output.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Remember that NaNoWriMo stresses editing free writing. If you plan your work, you should be editing to at least ensure your writing follows your plot structure.</span></div>
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<div class="p1"><span style="font-family: 'helvetica neue' , 'arial' , 'helvetica' , sans-serif; font-size: large;">I have always had mixed feelings when discussing NaNoWriMo.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>When it first started, I thought how unique for beginners and in the early years there was nothing I could see to change my opinion until<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>I looked at the quality of some of the results. From such a month of frenzied, frenetic scribbling came both<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>Wool by Hugh Howey and Water for Elephants by Sara Gruen. I can never trivialize the competition again and I will not. There you have my serious accolade.</span></div>
<div class="p1"><span style="font-family: 'helvetica neue' , 'arial' , 'helvetica' , sans-serif; font-size: large;">NaNoWriMo is not my writing tool of choice. Writing for me is a solitary activity. Whether a blog post, short story, or notes for a novella, I do not want the encouragement or the companionship of a group of other writers. Recognition by other writers and readers is another thread altogether. That is why I have a blog and why I submit my stories and articles for publication. But the development of the plot and the agony of creation is, in my opinion, a solitary endeavor.</span></div>
<div class="p1"><span style="font-family: 'helvetica neue' , 'arial' , 'helvetica' , sans-serif; font-size: large;">I believe in a structured environment for writing. You must take the time and expand the effort to build your plot line. You must make an effort to craft a strong cast of characters. This is not a requirement for NaNoWriMo.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<div class="p1"><span style="font-family: 'helvetica neue' , 'arial' , 'helvetica' , sans-serif; font-size: large;">And finally, editing is an integral part of the writing process.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>My two favorite writing tools are Scrivener and Ulysses. I divide my work into sections or sheets, and when I complete a section, I edit it in a simple manner. I correct errors of spelling and grammar. That’s enough for a first run. Final editing is much more extensive and done as the final writing step. Something I should have to give up during NanoWriMo.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03173562052707675381noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3910054341173934933.post-90257622281755325652018-11-07T18:03:00.000-08:002018-11-07T18:03:37.185-08:00Rejection by Cover Letter <table cellpadding="0" cellspacing="0" class="tr-caption-container" style="float: left; margin-right: 1em; text-align: left;"><tbody>
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<span style="font-size: large;">The cover letter is one of the least understood and least appreciated tools in the writer’s toolbox. It introduces your work to the editor. </span></div>
<span style="font-size: large;">Think of your work as the introduction of humanity to a powerful alien race. If it is done well, humanity lives. Done poorly, bye bye your mother et all. Smile if you will, but understand both your ego and your wallet will thank you for doing this.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">Devote a paragraph or two showing how your manuscript fits the genre of the publication. If you have written a romance gently elaborate on the love between the main characters. You need to show how your work is in every way a well-crafted love story. Do not get carried away with this step. You do not need a novel to introduce a novel nor a poem to preface a poem.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">This is a challenge to do well. It has nothing to do with the work you are trying to promote and everything to do with you as a writer. What is the theme you are promoting? For example, the theme I send as part of my cover letters is the theme I express on my blog page: <b>“I enjoy writing stories that bend your mind. I think most people have a deviant bent and that personality quirk needs to be stimulated and encouraged. I like dragons who devour both the knight and his horse.”</b> It takes time and some effort to find your theme but it is an exercise every writer should do.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">This is a short paragraph or two about what you have accomplished as a writer. What and where you have published. Why you started writing. You can also, with a degree of humor, state you have more than fifty rejection slips. Even the bumps you encounter in your career can be discussed in a positive and humorous style. This is the least important part of your letter and unless it is asked for don’t include it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">1) I am a great writer.</span></h4>
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<span style="font-size: large;">We know we are good writers. Even though we get rejected that knowledge spurs us on to continue writing. It is difficult to understand why certain editors and publishers cannot see our greatness. As great authors, we have a moral obligation to show them the errors they are festering under. What better way to tell them than within the cover letter. DON’T! If you are truly great, or even ready to be published, you will be noticed. It takes time, effort, and talent. Always remember the mantra of most successful writers: <b>Self Praise Stinks. </b></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">It is the bane of most writers to blame the editor when their manuscript is culled. You, as the writer, has every right, nay obligation, to bring the crassness and worthlessness of what they do to their attention. Like it or not, the value of the red pen is beyond dispute. The problem is you will attempt to pass off these errors as literary license. Absolutely not true. It is<br />sloppy work on your part. Just because the editor doesn’t discuss your failings with you does not mean he is wrong. You should know enough to do your own editing. Some of you will hire another to do the onerous task for you. Sorry, you get what you pay for, and most “editors” who will soak you for a few hundred bucks probably have your skill level or less. They merely have tools you are too lazy to find yourself. Remember, your work is yours alone. It is not the spawn of some hack. So, do your own editing and do it well, including the cover letter. </span></div>
Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03173562052707675381noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3910054341173934933.post-13392247120896652512018-11-01T10:26:00.001-07:002018-11-01T11:48:23.909-07:00Why Was Your Manuscript Rejected -- Part II<br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">The final significant reasons for rejected manuscripts are not readily discussed by writers since most writers don’t like talking about them or accepting responsibility for correcting them.</span><br />
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</span> <span style="font-size: large;">Writing has rules. If your partner, your muse, or even your pet turtle tell you differently, show them the hand; even the finger. The hardest set of rules in writing you must abide by are the rules of Grammar.</span><br />
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</span> <span style="font-size: large;">For some reason, grammar has fallen out of favor with teachers who claim your parents should have taught you and by parents who claim it is your teachers’ duty to teach you grammar. Let me remove all doubt as to who is responsible for how you write; you are. Not your parents and not your teachers. The rejection slip does not go to them. It goes to you. Luckily for us, Grammar, like Mathematics, is based on a set of rules. All you need do is work within the rules, and you have resolved the problem. But where are these rules and how do we use them?</span><br />
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</span> <span style="font-size: large;">Take a deep breath and try to relax. This post is not mutating into a ten thousand word essay on the use of the collective noun. I don’t even intend to tell you the rules. I am going to tell you where to find them and how to apply them. Think of your first visit to an attorney’s office. You probably were impressed with the volumes of law books on display. As a writer, you only need one (honestly just one) rule book. It isn’t even as thick as the St. James Bible. But, to keep this in perspective, you do want the physical book. You do not want the ebook version even though it is available. Since this book is for reference, it requires physical interaction. The book, preferably hardbound, is The Elements of Style by William Strunk Jr. You will use it only when whichever of the next two tools I offer you give you just a vague answer, and you need to hear from the expert. The expert and your faithful friend for questions of style is William Strunk.</span><br />
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</span> <span style="font-size: large;">The problem and the greatness of tools found in books are they are tactile and time-dependent. I present you with a choice of two tools which help you comply with the rules of grammar, style, and some of the laws of spelling. Both tools offer a free trial period, and I strongly suggest you read all the available information on both before making your decision. The two tools packing the most bang are Grammarly and ProWritingAid.I have used them both and the one I think is the better product is Grammarly. It is leaner and sparser than ProWrtitingAid. Grammarly offers a desktop application into which you can copy or load your manuscript. You can specify information about the manuscript and its projected audience. Grammarly, with tremendous accuracy, will point to almost all the flaws in grammar, style, and spelling. Its advantage is that it tells you what it thinks is the correction which you can accept or reject. It also gives you an overall score of your writing and how you rank amongst other equivalent Grammarly users. Its most robust value, in my opinion, is its leanness. You don’t get flooded with information about the error. Nor does it give you all the possible corrections. It provides what it computes to be the best answer for your writing audience. To me that is invaluable. The cost of Grammarly after the trial period is $70.00/year. It can be paid by the year or by the month.</span><br />
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</span> <span style="font-size: large;">ProWritingAid is an excellent product. If you choose, it will provide you with almost too much information. It interacts with most browsers and most word processors. It even works well with Scrivener. I would have paid more attention to it if it had worked well with Ulysses. When I was using it, I could find no flaws in either its performance or the information provided. Again, for me, it was giving far more than I needed and much more than I wanted. For people beginning to write and for people who know they are not very good with style and structure, ProWritingAid is an excellent application. After the trial period, ProWritingAid will cost you $50.00 for the first year. For three year it is $100.00. For a permanent license, it is only $175.00. Either product is invaluable for the price. While deciding on my choice, I subscribed to them both for a year and used them both for everything I wrote. Grammarly gave slighter better results when confronted with more obtuse grammatical errors. My suggestion is to pick the product that best serves your needs.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "helvetica neue" , "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">As writers, we all want to see our works published. We want to prove that we have something important to say and some readers enjoy reading our words. It is our readers who make breathing worthwhile. Most importantly they make the pain of rejection bearable. Most of us go unpublished and unrecognized from fear of trying to publish or from an overabundance of rejection slips.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "helvetica neue" , "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;"><span style="white-space: pre;"> </span>Most published writers know rejection letters are impersonal and trivial. They are merely messages to move on. Find someplace else for your work. For the beginning author or the author whose heart is exposed to the world 24/7, a rejection is a rapier cut across the heart. It is highly personal and brutal. It is psychological rape, and its damage is forever.</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "helvetica neue" , "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;"><span style="white-space: pre;"> </span>While there are numerous types of rejection letters, almost all of them fall under four categories. The first category is broad, encompassing nearly half of all rejections, and is entirely due to the carelessness of the writer.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "helvetica neue" , "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">Imagine you write as well as Dean Koontz. Your grasp of plot and character development are impeccable. Your story will scare your reader into a tizzy of fear and breathlessness as they turn every page. There is no doubt both Netflix and Amazon Prime will be calling you to arrange serialization rights. This literary gem will not only ensure your acceptance into the hall of Successful Writers, but it will make you rich. You submit this well-written scary tale to the editorial staff of Modern Romance, and it is immediately rejected. Impossible though it might seem, your rejection email is cold and heartless, making no reference to its quality or value. You got what you deserved. Why did you submit a well-crafted, scary tale to a romance publication? There is a rule to be found here. No matter how well written the work, if it is outside the genre of the publication, it is not wanted and utterly worthless to that publication. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "helvetica neue" , "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">These are three far too common errors that seem to accrue to writers who write by the seat of their pants. To whit, they have an idea, and they just start writing, and no matter what, they keep on writing. The resulting rejection usually can be attributed to the following reasons.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">If you write, if you read about writing, or if writing is only a dream not yet realized, you have heard about keeping a journal. Some writers swear by it and other writers swear at it. Just a few months ago I was entrenched in the camp of the naysayers. Keeping a journal demanded my time, pulled me from my current writing project, and it threatened to take on a life of its own. But, I kept reading excerpts from journals and diaries of writers I like, and I decided to try to understand journaling in terms of value. The apparent deterrents I have already mentioned. </span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">One of the most powerful and compelling reasons to keep a journal is that it allows you to explore your own emotions, mainly how they apply to what you are engaged in doing and thinking. As a very concrete example, I am writing a short story whose main character is a witch who has been caught, tried, and convicted. She is wearing only a jute sack soaked in coal oil, and the smell has invaded not only her body but her hair, and it is all she can feel, smell, and taste. She is tied to a stake, and her feet are on the top of what is obviously a pyre. She is being taunted by her one guard who enjoys telling her death is quickly approaching. I was able to write how I felt waiting to be burned to bone long after the fat melted past the tallow. How I would smell like burnt mutton. <b><i>Writing and feeling from different points of view hidden from your audience is a benefit both exhilarating and satisfying.</i></b></span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">1) Journaling allows you to write anything and know that unless you permit, nothing in that journal will ever be read by anyone else. This gives you a blank slate to examine your deepest fears, desires and wants. Before you scoff and accuse me of crossing the bounds into madness, it is ok to write thoughts of madness, twisted things and poisoned lollipops. Everyone nurtures a secret side, and that is how we develop really deep and sometimes even hilarious storylines.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Consider for a moment Edward Albee’s <b><i>Who’s Afraid of Virginia Woolf</i></b> and Peter Shaffer’s <b><i>Equus</i></b>. Both plays are deeply twisted tales of deviant behavior ringing true in the human comedy. Neither writer could have pulled these ideas from reading Harry Potter. You have to write and feel from something that burns and pains your very soul. If you wish, think of journaling as the poor man's psychoanalysis. Go for it. Plum your depths.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">2) Journaling will vanquish writer’s block forever. If you have explored the emotions and the feelings of your plots and your dreams you have a wealth of ideas to pick from. You will never stare at your keyboard cursing your failed muse. You don’t need a muse. You have a journal. Take one of your thoughts, your feelings from your journal, and start writing.</span>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03173562052707675381noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3910054341173934933.post-39482891707811255932018-10-03T07:34:00.000-07:002018-10-03T07:34:10.354-07:00The Habit and Ritual of Writing (Part 2)<br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">We can expect to write easier, and perhaps even better, as we write by habit rather than by inspiration. What role does ritual play in the development of good writing habits and how do we use ritual to drive our writing forward?</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Writing rituals serve as safe havens against the goblins that plague us as we strive to share our thoughts. Boundaries of place and time are very comfortable security blankets. One person has converted what was a closet for winter coats into a writers studio. Into the closet, she has wedged a computer desk. A small bar stool serves as her chair. One might think that would be a claustrophobic nightmare, but, think a bit more. It is almost like a thunder blanket. It acts as a surrounding for your ideas. You are in extreme proximity to your thoughts and the tools you use to transfer your thoughts from mind to page. There is both comfort and desire to accomplish a goal working like this. Obviously, this approach is not for everyone. What is important is the realization that as writers we need a familiar and comfortable place to write.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Inherent to our rituals is the time component. It is much easier to drive the writing habit if it is under the control of time. We can ritualize three hours a day, or fifteen hundred words a day; whatever you decide, it is the ritual of limits that makes our productivity much more comfortable to accept and comply with. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Writers need the irrational magic of control as the final and most encouraging ritual to support their habit of writing. There is magic looking forward to the suspension of reality inherent in the act of writing. It is almost hypnotic in effect. This is something you share with a group of extraordinary people. In your range of acquaintances how many of you write? You may be one of two. How powerful you are to step into a separate divergent reality. You create. You build edifices in your mind and transport them, stone by stone, into the real world. You have a talent possessed by very few. You control how you write through the process of habit and ritual.</span>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03173562052707675381noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3910054341173934933.post-68807482159209075172018-09-30T08:20:00.000-07:002018-09-30T08:20:34.088-07:00The Habit and the Ritual of Writing<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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<span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">This is the first of two posts dealing with the not so obvious persona of being a writer. These internal characteristics are habit and ritual. Standing in front of the mirror and saying “I am a writer” makes you neither a writer nor a stand-up comedian. One becomes a writer by studying the writing of recognized good writers and by developing the habits conducive to writing. Not only must you develop good writing habits, but you must also approach your craft using rituals designed to foster the skills and the habits you need to consistently write well. You cannot separate the two nor can you assign more value to one than the other.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">Before you can truly begin to channel your wish to write into a reality, you need to find the motivation driving you to write. Is it the desire for money, for fame, for great recognition, or is it a still small voice urging you to write. You cannot ignore this step. You can and should ignore what others might think of your motivation. What is important is that you see it as being truly unique and very important to you. </span><br />
<span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">Take a moment for some introspection. More than one person has tried to trivialize the requirement of motivation. What is critical, they say, is that I want to write. If you really want to write you need to strive for a reward, and that is your motivation. Find out what that is, write it down and memorize it. Every time you think of writing think of your motive for writing. </span><br />
<span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">My motive for writing is I want to be read. That is why I write a blog. I know a little about writing so I write posts about the craft and intricacies of writing. Since “blogger” supports pages I post my fiction under pages. I enjoy reading comments and try to answer all of them even if it is only to thank the reader for having commented. I also pay attention to my blog statistics and the analysis offered by Pinterest. I know what post is being read and which posts are being ignored. </span><br />
<span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">Everything you write will play to the fulfillment of your motivation. Now that your motive is in clear view, and your subject is known, how are you going to write today? Establish a clear, attainable goal for your writing session. If you are starting a novel, your goal is not to finish it today. Think in terms of how many words can you write for as long as you are going to write today. Steven King writes about 2,000 words a day. If you can do that every time you sit down to write I am happy for you and honestly, I am envious of you. I have learned over some years that I am most comfortable with from 350 words on a not so good day to one thousand words on a really good day. If I get between 500 to 750 words a day, I am a happy writer. Note, I said writing daily. Looking in the mirror, I realize I am a fallible person. I don’t write every day all the time. I am a voracious reader and if I want to take a day to read that is my right, and I will do so as I see the need. But I do know that for most of the week I will spend whatever time is necessary to meet my word goal. </span><br />
<span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">If you can achieve your daily writing goal, you are well on the way to forming a lifelong, writing habit. If you can only write once or twice a week, remember that you are writing from habit while you write. Encourage yourself to write every day, but do not belittle yourself if you are not 100% successful. For every goal you achieve I applaud your effort and encourage you to continually strive toward achieving your motivation.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">This person could sell snake oil at a<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>rattlesnake convention. The first scent of mendacity is when you look at the bio and see the author expounds he is, in fact, a successful writer. He is the writer of at least five well received and sought after books on writing and personal development. What you don’t see is all the books are self-published, poorly written, and are freely given away to help convince you to follow his unusual and unique “Develop as a Writer” class. The class which usually sell for $1500 is now available for just $900. If you act within the next 24 hours, you will get the early bird 33% discount on top of that. A lot of people will pay to be told they are a writer especially when it is a "successful writer" doing the telling. Let me be really obvious about this one point. If you have to tell people you are a writer, you probably are not.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "arial" , "helvetica" , sans-serif; font-size: large;">I have altered this headline with the number of posts and the length of time stated. The inherent lie is the statement that something of value has been learned and will be shared. This lie suckered me in just last week as I really wanted to understand what he had learned and how it had affected him.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></div>
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<span style="font-size: large;">After reading this post, it became apparent these characteristics were true not only for writers but for policemen, fire rescue personnel, bartenders, middle-level managers, even for CEOs and CFO’s. At some level, these characteristics could be applied to professional assassins and Mafia Dons as well. The stated personality traits had very little to do with defining the class of people known as writers.<br />Four traits are crucial for writers. Can you write without them? Yes, but probably not very well.<br />1) If you want to write well, you must be an avid reader.<br />I think it is the norm to read more than to write. I don’t write for relaxation or pleasure. I write because I want to be read. I see writing as a vocation, reading as an avocation. I read for pleasure. I enjoy well-written novels and stories. I enjoy seeing some really well-done movies and intuitively knowing what if any book drove the film. I devour classics. My favorite books are War and Peace by Tolstoy, The Brothers Karamazov by Dostoevsky, and Heart of Darkness by Conrad.<br />2) Writers must love to manipulate words. You should want to take a paragraph you’ve written and make it stand out. You want to grab your readers attention. You want to rivet the reader to your words. For a perfect example of grabbing your reader, read the opening paragraph of Shirley Jackson’s The Lottery. This short story is recognized as perhaps the best written short story in American Literature.<br />3) Writers must be able to view their first draft through jaundiced eyes.<br />You may be most accepting when you review the works of a fellow writer, but you cannot be so accepting of your own work. Your first draft gets something on paper. Even if you have Steinbeck's soul, your first draft stinks. You have spelling errors, errors in grammar and tense abound. Consider yourself a great surgeon and the life of your manuscript is in your hands. Make it whole, and when you have done that, do what not even a surgeon can do. Make it better. When you have accomplished that, your work is ready to be seen.<br />4) Writers must write.<br />Now that’s an obvious characteristic, right? No, it’s not. The number of writers who are working on chapter two of their first novel, which will be a fifty-three chapter work of absolute brilliance abound. They’ve been writing it for seventy-three months, but they are experiencing a slight block in creativity. They don't write. They brag about their work in progress and do nothing else. We know writing is hard work. We know we stumble. We suffer from self-doubt. We are plagued by insecurity. If you don’t make the time to write and you don’t use that time to write you will never be a writer. Bragging rights are free, writing is hard.</span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">The Internet is the reference point of choice for mathematicians, scientists, teachers, and most certainly for writers. It has become a fact of writing apprenticeship that to write decently one should produce five hundred words each day. For day after day, week after week we grind out 500 words. I have written about my dogs from three different perspectives; as their owner, their friend, and as a fellow walker. Five hundred words about two dogs and after rereading the essay, it was not all that well written. But I did do the 500-word daily gig. The questions needing answers are: 1) Did it make me a better writer? 2) Did it teach me to write well? 3) Was the process of cranking out words worth a damned thing?</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Did it make me a better writer? No, how could it? How does writing 500 words on Wednesday make them better than the 500 words written two weeks prior? It doesn’t. It can’t. </span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Did producing 500 words daily teach me anything about writing well? No. All it accomplished was to let me write on Facebook, “Another 500 words written!!” This generated many kudos from other aspiring writers trapped within the same vortex I was being sucked into.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">And finally was any of this process worth a damned thing? Yes, for me it had value. Its value had nothing to do with writing per se, but I could not write at all well without having learned this one lesson. I learned to make writing a habit. I have learned to sit down with my open MacBook on my lap, knowing what I want to write about, and just write. I could not have learned to do this without the ordeal of writing 500 words every day.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">When I first began this process, I wrote my short stories in segments of 500 words. There were days the words would not come. Even when I knew how I wanted the story to progress over that 500-word segment, the words would not flow. Writer's block is very specific. I put aside the story and began working an idea about a blog post I wanted to write. I also learned to keep a journal and write in 500-word segments. I wrote about friends, animals, my life partner my wife, even about going to a natural foods grocery store. All those subjects are excellent grist for a journal. </span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;"> For the last month, you have written 500 words a day consistently, every day. Sometimes you wrote during the day, and sometimes beginning at midnight when you want to be sleeping, but you wrote on. You have been told, and you fervently believe that you must write every day, No matter the conditions, no matter what you write, just write. And by god you’ve done it, written every day. You have resisted the urge to have “WRITER” tattooed across your forehead, even though you know it is well deserved.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;"> You sit in front of the keyboard, fingers at the ready. You are preparing to share your universe with the world. Twenty minutes later your fingers still haven’t moved.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;"><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre;"> </span>Writer's block is squeezing your intestines. Your fingers want to spasm. You are standing in front of the dreaded writers' wall, and nothing you can do will get you over the top. You are so frustrated you are ready to cry, or worse give up writing altogether.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;"> There are many steps we can take to push past such stumbling blocks. The first and easiest cure for writer's block is to take a walk. If you have a dog, walk with her for about a half hour or so before sitting down to write again.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;"> If you are blocked when you have already started writing something such as a story, a novel, or a blog post, stop working on it. Start something else. Begin writing another blog post or a new short story or start writing the idea for what you thought of as your second novel. An alternative to this is to begin a journal. Write out your frustrations or write about your friends or anything you might want to write in a journal. This takes you away from the block into a whole new sphere of writing. You probably should not spend more than an hour of your time doing this because you really do want to finish your first endeavor.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;">Often writers' block strikes when you are deciding what you are going to write. There is nothing worth writing that has not already been written. The approach might be unique, but the idea has already been used. If what you want to write is fiction your best way to find ideas is to look at ideas that have been around far longer than you. Look at The Brothers Grimm, or Hans Christian Anderson, or even Aesop. There is also the realm of mythology as well as the early histories of other cultures. Ideas abound, and they are ready for your own unique interpretation.</span><br />
<span style="font-size: large;"> While writers' block can be a fearful obstacle, it can be overcome with your own diligence and desire to get your ideas into the public domain.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre;"> </span>As writers, how do we build our tales and spin our yarns? The most creative writers, as they will tell you, are the Pantsers. The Pantser writes with magic. He looks through the wall of Writers Block, and with magic driving him, pure blinding creativity flows into his hands, and beautiful words flow like spray from a waterfall. Most of them are happiest with pen and paper, or typewriter, and will not approach a computer until composing the final draft.</div>
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At the other extreme are the plotters. They have produced copious notes, using Evernote and pencil and scratchpad. Scenes are built from notes into almost perfect paragraphs. Characters, certainly the major ones, are spelled out in meticulous detail. By the time the plotter sits to begin the actual writing, most of the book is written and never, ever is there a flaw in the plot. The detail of the text is beautiful in its simplicity but is built from the meticulous notes that are the skeleton of the story. </div>
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<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre;"> </span>Good writers are neither plotters nor pantsers but are hybrids depending on what they are writing. I have heard some novelists say they are pantsers, but I don’t believe it. You cannot write a really cohesive novel without some kind of outline. It will fall apart or be devoured by its own complexity. </div>
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<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre;"> </span> If you are writing a piece of flash fiction why would you bother with an in-depth development cycle? If you are writing a novel, novella, or a long short story, you will merge both tools and develop a well-constructed work devoid of plot holes. Your hero will have the same hair color from start to end. More importantly, the knife scar that began on his left cheek will not have migrated to the opposite side at the conclusion of chapter seven. </div>
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For an example of flash fiction using the pantser method, see “The Tell-Tale Canary” in the pages section of this blog. </div>
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<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre;"> </span>An example using both methods is“Sirens Song” also in the pages section. The two primary characters Martin and his Muse were crafted using an outline. The story grew by writing around the character descriptions.<br />
<span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space: pre;"> </span>All stories in the pages section are written by me.<br />
Your comments are most welcome.</div>
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